Monday, June 5, 2017

"Words to use instead of amazing"


  • Adorable
  • Alluring
  • Ambrosial
  • Astonishing
  • Astounding
  • Awe-inspiring
  • Awesome
  • Beauteous
  • Beautiful
  • Bewitching
  • Beyond words
  • Blue-ribbon
  • Bonny
  • Breathtaking
  • Brilliant
  • Capital
  • Captivating
  • Charming
  • Classy
  • Darling
  • Daunting
  • Dazzling
  • Delectable
  • Delicate
  • Delicious
  • Delightful
  • Divine
  • Elegant
  • Enchanting
  • Enthralling
  • Enticing
  • Ethereal
  • Exalted
  • Excellent
  • Exceptional
  • Exhilarating 
  • Exquisite
  • Extraordinary
  • Fabulous
  • Fantastic
  • Fascinating
  • Fearsome
  • Fetching
  • First-class
  • First-rate
  • Glorious
  • Gorgeous
  • Graceful
  • Grand
  • Heavenly
  • Ideal
  • Impressive
  • Incomparable
  • Inconceivable
  • Incredible
  • Indescribable
  • Ineffable
  • Inspiring
  • Irresistible
  • Lovely
  • Luscious
  • Magnetic
  • Magnificent
  • Majestic
  • Marvelous
  • Mesmerizing
  • Outstanding
  • Prodigious
  • Radiant
  • Rapturous
  • Ravishing
  • Refind
  • Resplendent
  • Savory
  • Scrumptious
  • Sensual
  • Sexy
  • Shocking
  • Spectacular
  • Splendid
  • Staggering
  • Striking
  • Stunning
  • Stupefying
  • Sublime
  • Superb
  • Supreme
  • Surprising 
  • Tantalizing
  • Thrilling
  • Top-notch
  • Transcendent
  • Tremendous
  • Unbelievable
  • Unearthly
  • Unutterable
  • Uplifting
  • Wonderful
  • Wondrous
  • Yummy

Sunday, June 4, 2017

"The Writing Process"

  1. Prewriting
    1. Research
      1. Library
      2. Internet
      3. Interviews
      4. Outlining
    2. Freewriting
    3. Clustering
  2. 1st Draft
    1. Fast
    2. Get it down
  3. Revision
    1. Structure
    2. Content
    3. Support
    4. Point of view
  4. Proofreading
    1. Diction
    2. Grammar
    3. Mechanics
    4. Format
  5. Publishing
    1. Posting 
    2. Submitting
    3. Mailing

Tuesday, April 4, 2017

"Bad Beginnings"

  • Waking Up: Starting your story with your character waking up (from a coma, from being knocked out, from being asleep, etc.) is not only cliche, but boring 
  • Dreams: Like waking up, starting your story with a dream is another cliche and it cheats the the reader 
  • Back Story: We don't care about your character yet! Get right to the action. Don't start with an info dump of background information on your character

"The Five Elements of Story"


  1. Someone to Care About
    • External
      • Undeserved Misfortune
      • Power and Humility
      • Weaknes
    • Internal
      • Morality
      • Desire
      • Wil
  2. Something to Want
    • Story Goal
    • Motivation
    • Internal and External
    • Stakes
    • Ideal
  3. Something to Dread
    • Curiosity, Expectation, Fear
    • Suspense
    • Dread
      • Dreadful Promises
      • Progressively Worse Obstacles
      • Dread Embodied, The Villain
  4. Something to Suffer
    • Suffering=Story Goal Value
    • Building Suffering to Climax
    • Hero's Ideal=Suffering
      • Physical
        • Inconvenience
        • Discomfort
        • Pain
        • Loss
      • Emotional
  5. Something to Learn
    • Theme
    • Premise
    • Ideals
      • Meaning
      • Character Change
      • Revelation 

"Character Motivations"

  • Basic Motivations
    • Survival
    • Failure
    • Peer pressure
    • Curiosity
    • Guilt
    • Desire
    • Instability
  • Noble Motivations 
    • Love
    • Loyalty
    • Honor
    • Obedience
    • Vengeance
    • Inequality
    • Unfulfillment
  • Evil Motivations
    • Hatred 
    • Dishonor
    • Pride
    • Greed
    • Revenge
    • Lust
    • Jealousy 
  • Fear Motivations
    • Death
    • Humiliation
    • Pain
    • Rejection
    • Loss
    • Regret
    • Shame

"How to Write a Scene In 11 Steps"


  1. What need to happen in this scene?
  2. What's the worst that would happen if this scene were omitted?
  3. Who needs to be in the scene?
  4. Where could the scene take place?
  5. What's the most surprising thing that could happen in the scene?
  6. Is this a long scene or a short scene?
  7. Brainstorm three different ways it could begin
  8. Play it on the screen in your head
  9. Write a scribble version
  10. Write the full scene
  11. Repeat 200 times

"9 Tips for Creating Conflict"


  1. Introduction: Every novel needs conflict. Without it, your characters have nothing to disagree on and no arc to develop. Without it your plot will flatline.
  2. Source of Conflict: Your protagonist should face conflict from lots of sources, but the main barriers should always come from your antagonist
  3. Make the Conflict Specific: Don't be broad and start a war because your hero and villain dislike each other. Start a war because your villain killed your heroes wife
  4. Target the Conflict: If you want your hero to invest in saving the world then give him a specific reason. Make the conflict personal to him.
  5. Make It Emotional: Make the conflict mean something to your hero. If it means something to them it will mean something to your reader too
  6. Realism=Believability: Make sure your conflict is plausible to your world/genre/plot. If it's plausible, it's realistic which makes it believable
  7. Time Is Of The Essence: Add time pressure to your conflict raises the pace and tension in your novel
  8. Go All In: Don't just raise the stakes once with your conflict. Add layers, keep raising the stakes and throwing barriers in your protagonists way until winning seems impossible. Only then does he become a hero to win
  9. Torture Your Hero: Conflict is there to torture your hero. In order to win they have to suffer and lose something.